More Critique

Roux: (SA) I enjoyed the discussions between the different people and I especially liked the quotes you had with every chapter.


Naomi: (SA)
No, I don’t think there is too much sex in your book (in fact there is nothing)
I think the reference to sex … when she thinks about it, and the brutality
of it was too much for me personally, and the last scenario revolted me – suggestion would have done it for me.
I loved the story of Poet and Luna, wish there was more about them.
The ending was a real ‘page-turner” – I could not put the book down waiting to see what happens next. An enjoyable story.